Date: 2006-06-27 04:03 am (UTC)
Oh, I adored this.

Simon's little sister came frantically, but Mal just ignored it, angry and crazy inside, thinking, she'd been the Alliance's plaything, God had let that happen; why couldn't he have her too, why couldn't he fix what they'd done wrong?

If he'd still been wearing his cross it would have burned a golden hole in his chest, weighted him down until his legs were solid lead and he never left the floor again, gave his life and sanity to give this girl a little.


That was sheer perfection, an excellent summation of a particularly important aspect of their relationship. They want to take care of each other, and vice versa, even though neither of them would admit that they need it.

This is one of your best, doll. Spot-on characterisation and quietly evocative, while still being dark and haunting. The last lines were excellent. Big, big fan of this piece.

But there was nothing more unholy.

... and that's exactly how we like it *winks and nods*

*loves you like whoa*
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