Date: 2006-07-06 01:32 am (UTC)
Wow. This story is.....really good. Really gets into Mal's guilty conscience,a nd the problems of the relationship.

Mind you,I think he's being a little too hard on himself, because she is a psychic, for Pete's sake. Yes, he's aware that there's a power differential between them that works in his favour, and he's a decent enough person that the differential concerns him, or rather, scares the hell out of him. But while he's right that River is vulnerable, she'd also know pretty damn fast if someone were taking advantage of her or being dishonest about their feelings. But Mal's not going to see that, and you've done a lovely job of covering what he DOES see.
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